Review #1- Apple Bloom's nap time

All in all, this was wonderful. The plot is nice, the grammar is nice, everything is nice. I saw a few small punctuation errors, but only between dialogue. The main characters are Apple Jack, Apple Bloom, and some of Big Macintosh. In the story ((BLOOP BLOOP, SPOILER ALERT)) Apple Bloom describes the monster in her nightmares as, well, A monster with big fangs. Who knows, it could be Chryssi, Sombra, or somepony else by the looks of it. What do you think?
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